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THE UNBREAKABLE BOND

Starts with tino walking with flowers in his hand, his hood is put up so you can't see his face, he stops in front of the gravestone and lays the flowers on top of it, he gets his hand and kisses his two fingers and then touches the grave he whispers a few words. Every time he would touch the gravestone he would remember all the times they spent together, each time he would shed a tear.

                TINO
    It should have been me ( a tear slowly ran down his face )

This scene shows the bond that the two lovers shared, they were inseparable, tino loved angel he would do anything for her, this scene particularly shows the two in the park on the swings, kissing on the bus, holding hands. Tino flashbacks to the day he said he loves her ( this scene is set in the park on the swings)

                TINO
    I can't imagine life without you in it

                ANGEL
    why do you have to be so moist ( she laughs )

                TINO
    Angel, I am not joking ...

                ANGEL
    you what? love me lol ( sarcastically)

                TINO
    I think I do I love you Angel

                ANGEL
    I love you too Valentino

                TINO
    (blushes) Oh damn! I have been waiting for months to hear you say that.

                ANGEL
    I want you and nobody else, even though you are so annoying.

                TINO
    I am annoying yeah hows this for annoying ( he pushes her really high up on the swings)

                ANGEL
    (laughs, Screams TINO)

            THE SCENE FADES TO BLACK.:

BACK TO THE GRAVEYARD

Tino touches the grave again and remembers the night when they went on their first date, he was all nervous because he couldn't believe how beautiful his girlfriend was, he slowly gazed into her eyes as they were walking to the arcade.

                ANGEL
    Do I have something on my face(looks confused )

                TINO
    no. you just look beautiful

                ANGEL
    thanks, you don't look bad yourself ( starts blushing)

                TINO
    (tino puts his arm around her)

                ANGEL
    you are so going to lose this game

                TINO
    Angel we both know whos going to win

                TINO
    (smashes the hockey puck right into angels goal )

                ANGEL
    ( screams ) cheater

                TINO
    Do you want a rematch?

                ANGEL
    Nah, I want some food

                TINO
    one day I'm going to save up and take you to one of the most expensive posh restaurants because you deserve the finest because you are the best.

                ANGEL
    awww, you are cute you know I don't care about that stuff

                TINO
    I know you don't but I just want to give you the world on a plate because you are mine.

                BOTH LAUGH
Tino and angel play a game of puck hockey, and tino lets angel because he just loves being around her after the game tino grabs the puck and leans closer to an angel and he gives her a cheeky little kiss on the cheek.


            FADES TO BLACK:

THE END OF AN ERA

Tino is still at the graveyard reminiscing about their first date how he wished he could have treated her better how he wished he had more time to spend with her he blames himself for what happened to an angel, he thinks her death is all his fault.


                TINO
    I wish I had more time with you, we could have gotten married or grown old together, I should of never let you enter that car, you were the best thing that had ever happened to me, why did that night have to happen. (MORE)

Tino remembers exactly what happened that night his hands started to sweat, he bangs his hands against his head in rage and remembers.


            FADES TO WHITE:

THE NIGHT THE BOND WAS BROKEN

narration - I told you, I loved you, but why did I get you

killed how is that love, I was supposed to protect you but even I did not see this coming, this was the day heaven gained an angel.

This scene is located on a road in a car, tino is encouraging an angel to get in the car because he wants to drive her

somewhere he is suggesting its a surprise for their anniversary, so angel hops in the car and tino is driving.

                TINO
    babe gets in the car, I wanna take you somewhere

                ANGEL
    are you sure you can drive

                TINO
    of course, I can my boy wouldn't let me borrow his car if I couldn't drive, babe you can trust me.

                ANGEL
    drive slow ok, there is no rush.

                TINO
    babe I got you, I would never put you in danger. I love you

                ANGEL
    ok, what are we waiting for then? Let's go

narration - I thought you could trust me but I couldn't even trust myself I soon lost control of the car while driving and all I remember is waking you shouting but when I could hear your breath I knew what I had done.

                TINO
narration - that was the day I lost you, and I have never forgiven myself after I saw blood dripping down your face I knew it was over I killed you, I lost you just as I had found you.

tino sheds his last tears and walks away from the gravestone and leaves a single note and small kiss goodbye his final words were.

                TINO
    I will always love you, my angel

            COMPLETELY FADES TO BLACK:

INT - ON THE SIDEWALK

It has been about a year since angel pasted away, Tino is still trying to move on from what happened, Tino is dressed in all black with his hoodie on, he is on his way to a job interview he feels good, he is ready to begin his life again until he accidentally bumps into a girl that looks like angel things take a turn for the worst. Tino is walking extremely fast he is not looking where he is going.

                TINO
    OH MY GOSH I'm going to be late ( says in his head )

without realizing Tino isn't looking where he is going and he bumps into a girl and knocks her to the ground

                REBECCA
    A little help would be nice ( reaching her arm towards Tino)

                TINO
    OH MY GOSH! I am so sorry, I didn't even see ........... you

without hesitation, he couldn't stop looking at her as if he has seen a ghost, he couldn't believe his eyes when he believed he could see his first love again, it was like he was reliving the first time he ever met Angel.

                TINO
    Angel is that you

                REBECCA
    The names Rebecca, and a little help would be nice ( itching her head )

                TINO
    Angel, I have missed you so much ( almost sheds a tear )

                REBECCA
    Listen I don't know who this Angel you are referring too but that's not me sir

                TINO
    I thought you were dead I went to your funeral.

                REBECCA
    I swear I am the one who hit their head ( looking very confused and scared)

                REBECCA
    Are you ok sir? Do you need me to call someone for you?

                TINO
    (soon snaps out of it and realizes that's not Angel)

                TINO
    I am so sorry ..... Rebecca did you say your name was, it has been a really long morning, you look extremely familiar.

                REBECCA
    To be fair I get this a lot, as long as you are ok, it's best I get going. ( starts to walk away then stops )

                REBECCA
    Wait actually I did not catch your name? ( shouts )

                TINO
    My name ? ( looks unsure )

                TINO
    My names Valentino

                REBECCA
    nice to meet you, Tino!

                TINO
    ( IN SHCOK BECAUSE ONLY Angel called him that )

                REBECCA
    I will see you around, oh btw I left my number in your jacket.
INT - TINO'S ROOM SOUTH LONDON

Tino has thought about this girl for 2 weeks if she could potentially be the new beginning he needs but he doesn't want to forget the love of his childhood life, someone who lifted him up when he was down but in all reality, he is gone and she isn't coming back and Tino has to face that. This scene set in Tino bedroom.

                TINO
    Should I call her (thinking to himself ) Just call her, man up Tino, Angel would want you to be happy.

                TINO
    ( receives a call ) Hello

                BROTHER JACOB
    Hey, bro, I am just calling to check up on you.

                TINO
    OH ... Hello

                JACOB
    whats with the cold greeting

                TINO
    I thought you were someone else

                JACOB
    well it's nice to know you are getting yourself out there

                TINO
    wait ... what how did you know it was about a girl

                JACOB
    haha! I didn't until now

                TINO
    Bro this girl .. Rebecca is exactly like Angel as in they could be twins.

                JACOB
    I think that maybe be a sign Lil bro.

                TINO,
    you know what I'm going to call her

                JACOB
    good luck Bro, Angel would want you to be happy.
INT - OUTSIDE REBECCAS HOUSE

Tino is dressed in an all-black tux, he even got a trim for this special occasion, he wore his best perfume and put on one of his best smiles, his heart was racing and his palms were sweating, but he couldn't be more excited for this date. Rebecca is in a beautiful red dress, looking stunning. Tino can't take his eyes off of her.

                REBECCA
    Hey, I'm glad you called me

                TINO
    YOU LOOK AMAZING ( could not prevent the duel from leaving his mouth )

                REBECCA
    you look good too, Tino.

                TINO
    I am sorry I took so long to call

                REBECCA
    it's ok, so where are we going?

                TINO
    wherever you want to go

                REBECCA
    I might be a little overdressed for this but I was thinking of the arcade.

                TINO
    ummmm Does it have to there? ( remembering that was his first date with Angel.

                REBECCA
    You scared I am going to beat you?

                TINO
    No, it's that. There's something I have to tell you.

                REBECCA
    lol, stop being moist, tell me after the arcade.

                TINO
    but, but its .....

Tino gets dragged away before he could even tell her what he was going to say, so, therefore, they are on their way to the arcade, Tino doesn't drive ever since last year he got a driving ban, for the accident that happened with Angel he hasn't stepped in a car since. That night still haunts him.

INT - ARCADE

So far the date is going extremely well, Tino is trying to see past that he is exactly in the same spot he stood in a year ago with the love of his life and that he is stood in front of someone who could be his future and he shouldn't let go of that.

                ARCADE MAN
    5 mins till closing everyone

                REBECCA
    oh my goodness already, how time flys when you are having fun.

                TINO
    yeah, I guess we did have fun (smiling directly at her ) but I better get you home it getting really late.

                REBECCA
    yeah time has really gone, I have had an amazing date

                TINO
    me too, when am I going to get to see you again

                REBECCA
    well, that's up to you

                TINO
    (looks confused)

                REBECCA
    you haven't dated a lot, have you?

                TINO
    I have only ever had one girl in my life, you could say childhood sweetheart.

                TINO
    in fact, we came here almost a year ago together.

                REBECCA
    what happened ? was it a mutual break up

                TINO
    ( starts to cry ) She is dead.

                REBECCA
    oh my gosh, I am so sorry for your loss.

                TINO
    if you are wondering how she died you should read the news.

                TINO
    I'm sorry but here's some money for a cab, I have to go ( runs off )

            FADES TO BLACK:

INT - GRAVEYARD

It has been at least a month since Tino went on his date with Rebecca, he still loves Angel, he feels though if he moves on he would be hurting her because they never actually broke up she just happened to die unexpectedly and it changed both their lives. Tino walks to the graveyard after it is a year of him never visiting her he thought it was time to do so.

Timo is holding a candle he places on the gravestone, all emotions are going through his mind but, he lights the candle

                TINO
    I love you, nobody could ever change that, you were my everything, the day I lost you, I lost myself I think I could never move on from you, irreplaceable love that's what we had. ( tears fall from his face )

                TINO
    As much as I can't let you go, it pains me and others to live my life, everything happens for a reason I need to stop blaming myself because I know you are watching over me.

                TINO
    I know one day I am going to see you again, I have no doubt about that because you and I were supposed to be forever, you were my world but now that world has gone, I know you sent Rebecca I know you want me to be happy, and I hope I will be.

Tino kisses his hand and then kisses the grave and gives Angel a final goodbye and he believes he is ready to love someone else again because he knows he can't love a ghost.

INT - OUTSIDE THE MALL OF BRIXTON

Tino has faith in what he has with Rebecca after finally visiting the grave of his dead girlfriend, so he decides to actually take the time out to personally get to know her. Tino seeks advice from his best friend LUKE and a few other friends from his college.

                LUKE
    what are you saying, Tino? long time no see

                TINO
    I know bro, it has been really hard for me losing Angel, but in all honesty, I've met someone.

                LUKE
    no way, bro I'm glad to see you trying to find happiness again after angel.

                TINO
    In all honesty, we went on a date and it was the arcade.

                LUKE
    the arcade you and Angel went to

                TINO
    yes!

                LUKE
    Did angel come up?

                TINO
    eventually, she did and I got emotional and I left the date and went to her grave to actually say goodbye.

                LUKE
    you left the date, bro?

                TINO
    What should I do, it been almost a month now since I've spoken to her.

                LUKE
    a month woow ..... umm so hear is what you are going to do, you are going to call her and apoglizse about what happened and I think its time to tell her the whole truth about what happened with Angel.

                TINO
    everything?

                LUKE
    do you like her?

                TINO
    I do like her

                LUKE
    then this shouldn't be a problem

                LUKE
    bro the crash was never your fault

                LUKE
    I let you borrow the car

                TINO
    but I decided to drive

                TINO
    it killed her LUKE but yes you are right I need to stop thinking like that.

                LUKE
    bro go get your girl.

                TINO
    ( gets shy ) Thanks, Bro

            FADES TO BLACK:

INT - TINO'S ROOM SOUTH LONDON

Tino wants to make it up to Rebecca because he feels bad for running out on their date and he feels as though he owes her an explanation as to why he left the date so quickly, so he called her and they arranged to meet. They meet at a small cafe near where they both live.

                REBECCA
    Make it quick I haven't got long

                TINO
    what's with the attitude, I want to explain.

                REBECCA
    explain why you ran out on our date, explain why you haven't spoken to me in a month.

                TINO
    I should have told you the truth about my first love both I met you. The thing with her is that you and she could be twins, ever wonder why I called you Angel when I first met you.

                REBECCA
    I generally thought you were confused.

                TINO
    no, I wasn't confused I believed she could have been alive.

                REBECCA
    It's all starting to make more sense

                TINO
    angel and I were childhood lovers we grew up together we did everything together, I was with her for 5 years ever since I was 13 years old, I generally loved everything about her.

                REBECCA
    so what happened to her?

                TINO
    we one day decided to go driving one day, I was driving the car and then we got into an accident, and well she didn't make it, I tried so hard to wake her up but she was gone, I held her in my arms until the ambulance came but her final breath was when they arrived, I'm still not sure why I am alive and she is laying 6ft underground when I'm the one who killed her. I killed her and I loved her the most, so I loved and I lost the love of my life.

                REBECCA
    I have no words to say, I can't imagine losing someone so close to you.

                TINO
    Rebecca, I can't explain this properly but I like you but you remind me so much of her but I have seen past that now because I'm starting to move on with my life, I'm ready to love again.

                REBECCA
    well, I still don't know what to say.

                TINO
    don't say anything its fine

                REBECCA
    no, t's not I want to say something but I'm scared to say it

                TINO
    answer this do you like me too?

                REBECCA
    I think we both know the answer to that.

                TINO
    (can't stop smiling)

                REBECCA
    I think we should give this a go

                TINO
    I think we should as well.
INT STREETS OF SOUTH LONDON

It was time for Tino to link up with the mandem again because it's been a while since they have all been together. Tino made sure he distanced himself from everyone after what happened but he is determined to get his life back on track

this scene is set in an area called South London all his boys are waiting for him with open arms.

Narration - you see before I met angel, I wasn't exactly the best of guys, angel took the bad side away from me I never saw need to go back to the trapping lifestyle because she held me down and I decided to go legit but now she's gone all that changes.

                MICHAEL
    wag1 bro you ready to come back to the strip

                DESHAUN
    it has not been the same without

                CHASE
    But big man ting I have been running things now so don't think you can come up here and change that

                TINO
    (laughs) who are you

                CHASE
    watch that tone before you chat to me

                MICHAEL
    ay chase cool it, that's Tino remember that

                CHASE
    you think just because you lost your girl you can run the mandem again

                TINO
    fam, relax I just came to make my ps

                CHASE
    exactly like we all are

                MICHAEL
    we got a special job for you bro

                TINO
    I ain't been on the roads in a minute

                TINO
    imagine I even tried going to a normal job interview making some low wages. I couldn't do it, she made me better but she ain't here no more. so mandem what we said we trying to make ps or what.

fast forwards to Tino supposedly in his element, he has all the tools to be a trapper again, a trap phone, bally, and product, after all these years they still even have the same connection. Tino puts on his mask and he starts selling products on the streets again. narration - she made me better, she really did.

                TINO
    you man I've made at least a bag

                MICHAEL
    people are happy to see back on the roads

                TINO
    must be. you man I have to cut I got a date

                CHASE
    did my guy just say date

                TINO
    yeah, bro, I've met someone

                DAHSAUN
    wooooow Tino new and improved

                TINO
    ay love you man, see you tomorrow

            TINO LEAVES:

INT TINO HOME - SLEEPING

it's about 2 am in the morning, tino, his mum and little sister are sleeping when they receive a very loud knock on the door, the little sister answers the door.

                LEANNE,
    who is it?

                THE POLICEMAN
    It's the police

                TINO
    LE don't open that door

                LEANNE
    Why what is going on ( looking confused)

                THE POLICEMAN
    you have about 5 seconds to open the door, otherwise, we will have to break it down.

                TINO
    alright I am coming

                THE POLICEMAN
    Valentino Jamal, I am arresting you on the count of selling class A drugs and money laundering, under act 104, you have the right to a lawyer, anything you say now will be later on be in question.

                TINO
    This has to be a joke right, I haven't done anything.

                BRITNEY
    Tino...

                TINO
    mum don't worry I will be home by lunchtime.

                THE POLICEMAN
    you best have a very good lawyer then son

                BRITNEY
    where are you taking my boy

                THE POLICEMAN
    mam I have to ask you to step aside.

                BRITNEY
    no excuse me I ask you a question (starting to get aggressive )

                THE POLICEMAN
    mam I'm going to have to ask you to move back otherwise I have to arrest you too for perverting the course of justice.

                TINO
    Mum, it is ok, I LOVE YOU!

                TINO
    Look after Britney ok

                BRITNEY
    where are you going tino .

                TINO
    I'm not going far, I will see you at lunch ok

                THE POLICEMAN
    alright that is enough let's go, son

                NARRATION - TINO
    at this point, I don't know how to feel, how did I get here. how did ii loose control this easily my whole life is about to be over and its all my fault?
PRISON CELL - SOUTH LONDON

Tino is sat in a police cell, awaiting his faint and whether he would make bail or not and in all honesty it is not looking good for him. He is being charged for all accounts, which includes money laundering

                TINO
    when do I get bail

                SECURITY GUARD
    you mean when is your court date

                TINO
    I can't go to prison

                CELLMATE
    look where you are, you are already processed into the system.

                SECURITY GUARD
    Valentino, you get one phone call make it count.

The security Gaurd unlocks the door and lets Valentino out and allows him to make his phone call, Valentino is very aware if he calls someone and they don't pick up its game over for him. He decides to calls Rebecca to try and act as his lawyer.

PRISON ROOM - ON THE PHONE

Tino grabs the phone starts to dial Rebecca's phone, every ring makes tino start to sweat, just as he's about to hang up Rebeccas accepts the charges and speaks to Tino.

                REBECCA
    who is this calling?

                TINO
    Rebecca Hay, it's Valentino

                REBECCA
    you are calling from prison ( has a shock in her voice )

                TINO
    yeah they arrested me for no reason

                REBECCA
    what can I do though?

                TINO
    I haven't got long so please listen carefully, I couldn't call my mandem because they would think I'm snaking them. I need you to get me a lawyer or someone to defend my case as quickly as possible.

                REBECCA
    I will definitely try my best Tino

                TINO
    don't worry in terms of costs, if they need an upfront payment there is 10k under my bed in my house. just let my mu know who you are .

                REBECCA
    Tino if anything happens just know i ...... ( the phone cuts )









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