5 act treatment

Logline - jealous scheming school girl , wants the lifestyle of the popular princess type which includes the boyfriend . 

Protagonist (young teenage bully) ( Sarah 
General characters -  Blonde Princess girlfriend ( aka Sunflower) 
The general goal for the protagonist - The blonde princess boyfriend  ( Jack) 

Act 1 -  Exposition - Sarah is most definitely the school bully , she spits in girls food, trips people up on her way to class and basically doesn’t care about anybody. Sarah sets her eyes on the hunk jock of the school but realises to get what she wants, she has to get sunflower out of the way . When she sets her eyes on something she stops at nothing to get it . Sunflower is her one and only target , so Sarah sets her trap for Sunflower and make sure she goes through with it , a gush of  running water soaked the girl from her silky blonde hair to her neatly painted toes she was completely hulminated . Sarah feels powerful and that she's one step closer to her goal which is the the blonde princess girls boyfriend and her life. 

Act 2 - Rising Action - Sarah feels like her power is slowly fading away because even though she humiliated Sunflower and thought she won , the boyfriend Jack  is still very much in love with his girlfriend and doesn't acknowledge the bully at all in anyway possible , so Sarah is starting to feel out of her depth a little bit and can't control  the emotions she is starting to feel , so she still wants to get the guy but she doesnt feel what she is doing is right , but even with that thought she has something huge for the blonde girlfriend , she thought to herself  what is her boyfriend Jack attracted to most her silky blonde hair and her gorgeous looks, from that point her imagination got the best of her and she was about to do the unthinkable . Sarah knew no matter what she would never be noticed , so she used that to her advantage by grabbing a pair of scissors and quickly snipped a chuck of the blonde girlfriends hair off without her noticing then when it was time for the gym , she went to her locker and swapped her powder with dirt and the blonde girlfriend screamed . 

Act 3 - Climax - In an act of desperation Sarah attempts to kill Sunflower by following her all the way home . Sarah feels broken and no matter what she does, she can’t shake this girl so she thought the only way to do that is to kill her , that way there would be no competition left for her to face . Sarah used the only weapon she could find which was a huge rock , just as Sunflower was about to turn around the bully swung and hit her around the head , Sunflower fell to the ground instantly . Sarah assumed she was dead and ran leaving her finger prints and excess blood on her clothes and on the ground . The police and ambulance was never called and the girl lay on the cold floor .


Act 4 - Falling Action - Jack  went searching for Sunflower because it had almost been 6 hours since they had spoken , Jack found Sunflower still alive but barely breathing she was rushed to hospital and the police were called . the boyfriend a small piece of clothing that was left behind by the bully . No one at school could figure out who this clothing belonged to and if this person was responsible for the attack on his girlfriend . He asked all around the school he even asked the bully , little did he know he was facing the attacker but had absolutely no idea . Sarah couldn't believe all the trouble she had caused because of her feelings and the way she acted out of emotion .  The attacker was discovered but never really caught , the bully looked at this as a life lesson . 

Act 5 - Denouement - Sarah confronted Sunflower as she layed in that hospital bed unconscious , as she confessed all that she has done to her knowing it was wrong , and she came to her senses that seeing her lying there knowing it was her who put her there ,she realised what she had been doing was wrong and even though she didn't get what she wanted in the end , she knew this wasn’t the right way to get what she wanted . The protagonist needs Psychological help and they know that . Sarah passes Jack on the way out of the hospital , he sees the clothing he saw that night and puts the pieces together but by the time he realised she was already gone and so was his girlfriend .  




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